User blog comment:Morgan silve/Bleach Based Poems Contest! Winner gets a new template!/@comment-1774413-20100926025230/@comment-1925947-20100926123443

Nice haiku, but the second line has six sylables, and in order to win the new templaye, a haiku must be written correctly. Not to be rude, this is why I recomended free style poems. I'm really looking for drama. I loved your style though and for that, you did great.