Talk:Tier Harribel

Personality section
So when I was editing this page for grammar I realized that I felt a bit uncomfortable with some of the information in the personality section of this article; I don't see that all of it is necessary. Rather than just plain removing a good chunk of material, I'd like for you guys to take a look at it and see what really needs to be there. Thanks. Dr vblschrf (talk) 07:28, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Please be more specific. I read through it and I don't see anything that could be rendered as "unnecessary", so would you care to point out what this "good chunk" of the section are you talking about? As I said, I don't see anything that could be particularly wrong with it. Lia Schiffer  (Talk)  07:40, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm referring to the second paragraph (but not the bit about Aizen's "ladies and gentlemen") and part of the fourth paragraph ("This was hinted when.....during their fight"). I guess unnecessary was the wrong word, rather "not particularly indicative of personality". 'Tis my opinion, and certainly not a major issue; just wanted to check what others thought on this. Dr vblschrf (talk) 08:02, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

I don't find any issue with those particular sections. The one which mentions her view of Aizen's power indicates, well, how she views Aizen, which is a part of her personality, and adding Aizen's regard of them may not be specific about her, but it is noteworthy and it wouldn't be better off anywhere else in the article, whereas it makes that particular sentence more complete. As for the last paragraph, the mention of her comments of Ichigo's fight, and Hitsugaya's reiatsu is backing up the personality trait of "showing concern for her opponents" again, it is a part of her personality and makes the section more complete. Lia Schiffer  (Talk)  08:23, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then. Nothing more to say. Thanks. Dr vblschrf (talk) 16:11, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Actually I looked at this yesterday before it being brought up and i thought the same thing there is this inferred information as well as the drawn out explanations. The personality section is supposed to be clear and to the point. Not like the plot section it should be effectively condensed. --Salubri (Talk)  16:29, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

In my opinion I think the first paragraph effectively sums up the personality section for Harribel. Like Salubri said, the rest kind of reads like a plot section. UraharaHitsugaya (talk) 16:44, October 2, 2010 (UTC)