User talk:Rocconorth

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Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Salubri (Talk) 07:30, January 19, 2013

Grammar Corner
Hi there. I'm Xilinoc, the head of the Grammar Corner. While the edits you have been making are productive and adhere to policy, please try to do them all in one go instead of over a series of edits, something we refer to as "edit fluffing". Thanks.--Xilinoc (talk) 02:38, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Rocconorth, I'm serious. Please make all your edits to a single page in one go instead of spread out over multiple edits. The last person who did this was not taken kindly to by the other members of this wiki. Additionally, you seem to have a few problems with sentence structure. As such, I would advise you to, at least for now, stick to fixing tense mistakes and predication errors.--Xilinoc (talk) 06:04, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

First off, you don't have to make separate edits to edit multiple sections of a page. All you have to do is go to the top of the page, where there is a blue button labelled edit. Clicking on that allows you to edit the entire page at once instead of individual sections. As for awkward sentence structure, this edit is an example. You do not need so many ands in one sentence - simply combining certain items in a list is perfectly fine - and listing the attributes of an appearance rather than describing the appearance of a character is unnecessary and strangely worded.--Xilinoc (talk) 06:35, March 18, 2013 (UTC)