User talk:Jirachiwish

Archive 1

Re:Archiving
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Quick comments on your Zanpakutō Rebellion fight edts
Hi, Jirachiwish I just wanted to make a quick comment, having been checking your Zanpakutō Rebellion fight edits. Perhaps, it is just me but it seems that a fair number of your sentences are possibly too long? I do notice that many of your sentences are very long as you frequently use many commas. I think that your sentences might risk being run-on sentences. It is just an observation that I made. I know that I often can put too much detail into my edits instead of being concise. Just thought I would mention that. ---Mr. N 04:28, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Byakuya's Betrayal:Revealed
Hmm. I see. Well, here is what I think: Stopping at when Byakuya enters the Zanpakutō cave is a point that could be fine. But I believe that since Byakuya's "betrayal" is one of the key points in the Zanpakutō Rebellion arc, it might be best to summarize (if not simply mention) Renji Abarai & Zabimaru vs. Byakuya Kuchiki & Senbonzakura and Byakuya Kuchiki vs. Sode no Shirayuki and Renji Abarai & Zabimaru vs. Byakuya Kuchiki & Senbonzakura. You certainly could mention in the Aftermath that some of the results of Byakuya's "betrayal" were those two battles. Doing that would work since this event is somewhat of a precursor to those battles. Take a look at other Event pages (as I believe that I did something similar with The Armies Assemble: Battle at Fake Karakura Town) ---Mr. N  05:19, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re: gif making
I've never made a .gif before, so I can't really help there. But Tinni posted a guide to making them in one of her blogs. She seems to be on here only very occasionally right now, so I don't know when she'll be able to get back to you on that. 10:42, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Fight Images
Ok, I added images from that episode, also tweeaked the text so the images fit without so many blanked spaces!! Done!! SunXia  (Chat)  12:33, May 8, 2011 (UTC)