User talk:Jirachiwish

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Quick comments on your Zanpakutō Rebellion fight edts
Hi, Jirachiwish I just wanted to make a quick comment, having been checking your Zanpakutō Rebellion fight edits. Perhaps, it is just me but it seems that a fair number of your sentences are possibly too long? I do notice that many of your sentences are very long as you frequently use many commas. I think that your sentences might risk being run-on sentences. It is just an observation that I made. I know that I often can put too much detail into my edits instead of being concise. Just thought I would mention that. ---Mr. N 04:28, May 8, 2011 (UTC)